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"A man who has never gone to school may steal from a freight car; but if he has a university education, he may steal the whole railroad."

-Theodore Roosevelt

College Admissions Assistance

Applying for college admission? Want to get a leg up on the competition? From researching schools to constructing an unforgettable admissions essay, Kristin can help you every step of the way. Whether applying to the U.C. or Cal State system, or to a private college, Kristin has many years of experience assisting students with every facet of the admissions process.

Admissions Essay Help

If you aren't sure how to get started on your essay, Kristin can show you how. This includes:

Brainstorming: After discussing your interests, Kristin will help you select the best topic and formulate an approach. You will learn how to construct a solid admissions essay, along with techniques for letting your individuality shine.

Evaluation: When you submit a draft of your essay, Kristin will spend time evaluating it, and will provide written feedback. After this, a period of continued revision will follow.

Personal Consultation: You will meet with Kristin in person, and every aspect of the essay will be improved upon. Content, grammar, style, and structure will be assessed, and you will leave feeling confident about your work.

Fine Tuning Option

Evaluation: Kristin will spend time evaluating your previously completed admissions essay. Grammar, structure, style, and content will be assessed.

Personal Consultation: You will meet with Kristin and discuss how your essay may be improved upon.

Please Note: Kristin does not write essays for anyone, and there is no guarantee of admission into any college. Students will learn the fundamentals, and complete an essay which reflects their capabilities.